strengths and weaknesses

The strengths of my paper would probably be that I hit all the points that I wanted to address in my outline and found some other points that I hadn’t originally thought about and got to put them in my paper. The weaknesses are that I seemed to ramble a lot. I also repeated myself so much and it sounds a little monotonous. I’m hoping that when I revise it, I’ll be able to cut out the unnecessary things and will be left with a decent paper. When I first started my paper, I thought that it would be extremely hard writing 1,500 words; at first it was, but then I started coming up with other ideas and it started to flow more easily. It was still fairly hard to write though.