When I read the comments on my first paper, I realized that the way I worded sentences could be ambiguous at times and also awkward. I used this information to reread my second paper and tried to make it more clear and understandable. Also, I didn’t realize how much I repeated phrases in close proximity; I definitely used this to help me revise my research paper. Another thing the corrections showed me was that I didn’t use nearly enough commas in my original paper. When I was editing the one due tomorrow, I tried to pay special attention to places where I should have put commas.
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